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Gentle wish
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Gentle wish
Weeping silently within a tower
Lamenting the fading light
Cries the frail moon flower...
Who weeps every wake at night
The flower who cried a thousand tears
And slept by the moons cold light...
Pray that heaven wipe away the fears
That she may get some sleep tonight
Please don't cry....
Gently wishes the pale moon
Please don't cry
Gently wishes the sad moon
The flower that had a broken heart...
And cried a thousand tears
The happiness that was torn apart
After all those long years
Please don't cry
Gently wishes the broken heart....
Please don't cry
Gently wishes the crying heart...
The flower who listened to the rain
Sing a voiceless song....
Forgot all the burdening pain....
And all else that's wrong
Please don't cry
Sings the pouring rain....
Please don't cry
Sings the weeping rain
The flower who loved the sun
Loved to dance in the light....
But when the sun was gone
She lost hope for all right
No longer will the flower hear the rain....
No longer will the flower feel her pain
For it was in the rain she felt her heart
Before it was trampled and torn apart
Locked within a darkened tower
Wept the silver little flower
Shadows tore her from the sun...
Like a child who had no one
But as she woke from scary fears
Drenched in cold wet silver tears
She found a light
Within the night
Gentle wishes from beloved friends...
The moon, the rain, it never ends...
For even if she was torn apart....
In the end she had a heart....
Please don't cry...
So the flower stopped crying....
A poem I wrote while listening to some lullabies ^-^
© 2012 - 2024 AdeliseEclair
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ohhh....o3o im not sure bout this but i guess the reason why you made the title "gentle wish" is because of the wishes of this either symbols/the moon,rain and etc etc.
it's like about someone who has lived in sadness but surrounded with lets say "friends" to comfort her..for her to stop crying...
but despite her sadness and her heart being torned apart,she found new hope that makes her stand and grow once again...this time,as a strong flower that will overcome strong winds and storms...
with the help of everyone around her,she has recovered from her sadness and have gained the strength to stop crying and go on with life
good poem here! but not as strucking as one of the old poem you had that i love the most >w>...[[not in a mean way]] but this one,if compared to other of your works seems quite simple but still good!
...but yea...its like "plain" sadness but not as deep as your other poems
it's like about someone who has lived in sadness but surrounded with lets say "friends" to comfort her..for her to stop crying...
but despite her sadness and her heart being torned apart,she found new hope that makes her stand and grow once again...this time,as a strong flower that will overcome strong winds and storms...
with the help of everyone around her,she has recovered from her sadness and have gained the strength to stop crying and go on with life
good poem here! but not as strucking as one of the old poem you had that i love the most >w>...[[not in a mean way]] but this one,if compared to other of your works seems quite simple but still good!
...but yea...its like "plain" sadness but not as deep as your other poems