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The monster.....

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The monster...

With every break of moonlight...
with every song of tears...
what seemed to be forthright...
Was wasted through the years..

I despise the eyes of greed
Intents with every creed
I despise all who speak of love...
and blessing from high above
I lost my faith...
I'm filled with hate....

I gave up my selfish whims...
and all those sacred hymns
that used to peace my heart..
from getting torn apart...

My pains it lashes out...
with every hollow shout
that falls on deaf ears....
and tired out tears...

Why wont anyone hear my cry?....
Will it end when I die?
I despise everything....
I despise it so....
That I could never let go...

My wounds will forever bleed....
To appease my hidden greed...
for a salvation that wont come....
.....

is cruel...
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Renalias's avatar
Pretty nice; I like the concept and overall tone. There are a few grammar errors: in the sixth and last stanza, there should be an apostrophe in "won't". Also, on the fifth stanza with "My pains it lashes out" - that doesn't make such sense; I'm assuming it's supposed to be "My pain, it lashes out."

Otherwise, it's a nice, emotional poem that, as said before, provokes much thought.